2012- 5- 31
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:: المراقب العام ::
الساحة العامة
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رد: استمتع معنا في أحلى اجازة مسابقة نصوص انجليزية
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Crimson Butterf
Salam everyone,
A lot of people say they don't have much happy days , and their life is full of tragedy and sadness . however, There is a lot of happy moments in life for everyone, but we don’t notice it . One of these moments is when you help someone in need, or when give 1 charity to the poor people 2 and you 3 see the happiness on their faces 4, you become happy. when you give water for 5 birds in a hot day and you 6 see all of them coming towards 7 the water, you will 8 feel happy. When you succeed in your studying 9 and you 10 see your family happy for you, you feel happy. When you see ill people suffering and you have many and many of the 11 blessings Allah gave you, you should be happy.
Happiness is something you feel not something you own, so it's not always a marital 12 thing.
 Feel happy and you will be happy |
 Are sure you're level 1? such a ncie one! your spelling and grammar are perfect
But I hope you focus on the followings:
1- Either you say or give or when giving
2,3,6,10,11- It's O.K. get rid of these words
4- I think the appropriate word is eyes
5- The correct preposition is to
7- This is British English, the American is toward
8- In the rest of "when" answers you used present time, so I think it's better to continue using the present.
9- I think the correct word is school
12- I didn't get you point here
Good luck
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