2012- 5- 31
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#166
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أكـاديـمـي فـضـي
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رد: استمتع معنا في أحلى اجازة مسابقة نصوص انجليزية
اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رضوان
 Are sure you're level 1? such a ncie one! your spelling and grammar are perfect
But I hope you focus on the followings:
1- Either you say or give or when giving
2,3,6,10,11- It's O.K. get rid of these words
4- I think the appropriate word is eyes
5- The correct preposition is to
7- This is British English, the American is toward
8- In the rest of "when" answers you used present time, so I think it's better to continue using the present.
9- I think the correct word is school
12- I didn't get you point here
Good luck
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thank you for encouraging me
i mean by the the last sentence
أن السعادة ليست فقط أشياء مادة تمتلكها كالأموال أو الهدايا، و لكن هي قناعة و شعور داخلي.
i hope you that is clear.
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