this is really great guys love your attemptes and your courage to write.. * i would like to give you some advices that may help you and in-rich your poems.. read more and try to find new words and know its translations in english this way you will gain your number of vocabulary.. also adding words that rimes will give your poems the musical sound while reading and its one of the greatest poems beauty. .. * * keep up the great work guys and may Allah bless you all.. *