2012- 10- 10
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أكـاديـمـي ذهـبـي
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رد: I've wrote it and you're reading it <3 ~
اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Dalal Khalid
بسم الله الرحمن الرحيمَ
I'm going to post the most random things here .. that I've
wrote
Feel free to comment but please do it on another color ..No black <3
This will be the first It's a speech that I've wrote it almost 3 years ,It was my 2 attemp on the same speech competition I made it to the semi- finals but that was all, Hope you like it <3
At the beginning I want to thank you all for giving me this opportunity again to represent my school in this competition.
Four months ago my mother had a surgery on her legs, one day after the surgery she was in pain. Therefore, I went with her to the emergency room;
We have waited for an hour because there were a lot of patients, and when we finally see the doctor he was able to speak Arabic but the nurses weren't, I was in a difficult situation. That because I had to be strong for my mother and try to let her calm down, and I had to speak English with the nurses and understand what they are saying and translate it for my mother, in that moment I realize that there is a lot of medical terms that I don't know, but I had to deal with it which, I did in a surprising way.
When we finally finish with the doctor I went with the nurse to bring a wheelchair for my mother, and I told her that I want to work here to help people but it's so tough to work in such environment, she replied "work hard and one day you'll be part of it".
I went out of the emergency room that day with knowing what exactly I want to be for my whole life. I see that events keep telling me to follow my vision so I'll.
Moreover, what I found amazing is that even though all the medical crew was busy a lot but that didn't stop them to be nice and helpful then I knew that I want to be one of them and If I couldn't then I will teach medical student to be like them.
in addition, I want to say all I know is I won't stop dreaming therefore I'm telling you don't be afraid to dream And I'm telling all the people who kept telling me I can't do anything but look at me now ,just being brave enough to stand again here on this stage and being afraid from nothing .
In conclusion, I want to thank my parents for supporting me I want to thank my country my teacher my friends my sister and I promise that I'll push myself over the limits and make you all proud of me .
God bless you all for listening and paying attention.
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i really liked the speech because it was a real story, sorry for your mom by the way
i think there are some grammatical mistakes, but not that much, i want to asses the writing not the grammar.
The essay was very nice, but it lacks the professional touch, it seems like you wrote it when you were in high school !! right
if this is the best you can do then i think you should work more on your self before you start writing professionally
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