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قديم 2012- 10- 10   #16
Unlucky
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تاريخ التسجيل: Sat Oct 2012
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رد: I've wrote it and you're reading it <3 ~

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Dalal Khalid مشاهدة المشاركة
[]this piece of writing is so good, it could be a good bed time story for kids,

if you can keep writing with the same style, i believe you can make fairy tales for kids and obviously you are so good at this

im honest, don't be upset with me

I am not upset at all you just didn't get the point it was just a hint that this child had some thoughts about herself which will help as the story goes on in makeing the thought of the girl who is trying to realize her inside and outside
grows up in a very complicated way
'cause she used to think ....diffrently
idk ..did you get it ?




yes yes, i understand what you mean..... the begging sounds like a fairy tale to me, but if you think you can develop the story to describe Dalals in her adolescence and mature age,then i think the story could grow into something great

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