2012- 10- 11
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#35
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أكـاديـمـي ذهـبـي
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رد: I've wrote it and you're reading it <3 ~
اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Dalal Khalid
Hate that I’m that week:
Really ,I need to stop myself ,waking up every day feeling worthless feeling unwanted and acting like it’s nothing but it still get to me ,I know I’m special in some kind of way ,but it seems to me that my life keeps running but I’m standing on the same place ? ,what am I supposed to do when the best part of me feels hopeless ,I know all I need is love ,and that’s what I’m trying’ to give to myself every day ,that’s what I should take care of for now, because if I didn’t do this I won’t be able to take care of anyone else .
(5 months ago) |
 I was touched by this
you are really writing from the heart and from experience , but if you want this to be published you should pick fancy words and have perfect grammar, which is not a big issue at this point.
"you have the writing skills, trust me, just try to use perfect grammar and "strong fancy story words
 thanks
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