2012- 10- 20
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#64
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أكـاديـمـي ذهـبـي
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رد: I've wrote it and you're reading it <3 ~
lol
dont get the wrong idea Dalal,the text seems good, but I wanted to point out that it was difficult to understand, thats all
and I'm proud of you, you gonna be a good writer someday
:here are some tips
"but you have weakness points"
in English they usually just say you have weaknesses, and same situation for "strength points "
 keep writing
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