المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Unlucky

lol
dont get the wrong idea Dalal,the text seems good, but I wanted to point out that it was difficult to understand, thats all


and I'm proud of you, you gonna be a good writer someday


:here are some tips

"but you have weakness points"
in English they usually just say you have weaknesses, and same situation for "strength points "

keep writing