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prestigious · 2013- 1- 28

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Serious Smile

Even i don't know anything about English poetry

But the meaning is great ..

Keep up and continue writing

Thank you very much
for your comming
see you soon

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة شهد الحروف

Wonderful poem END stunning Nile

thank you very much
You are so kind

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة شهد الحروف

A true forgot tell accept traffic Bntdhar Jdidkalmtweida

thank you very much
even if I understood
nothing

bntdhar -jdidkalmtweda

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة GhadaALShammari

aren’t we all
??

amazing poem

i loved the beginning
but i didnt like the end
when you said that your thoughts feel lonely

thoughts dont feel?

maybe if you said
my thoughts being lonely
or being lonely with my thoughts
or i was alone with my thoughts trapped in my mind
seeking help
or make this line ( Calling mammy needs some help
after that

sending my dreams , go fly blind

anything rhymes with kind lol
see this site its useful if you want to make your poems rhyme

http://www.wordhippo.com/

one more thing , i dont know but i dont think its ok for an adult to say mammy im just saying

BTW where did you get that from? i mean american say mom and mommy and British say mum and mummy.
but mammy never heard of it
..
rate+ like
keep it goin and keep it comin

hhhhh Actually
all what I want To give you what I was feeling about
I know that thoughts cannot feel
as human
(:
u can pick up the meaning
and thank you for corrcting me
even though I know that I did some mistakes
in order to give you the meaning
mammy<<<when you call your mothery very quickly
(:
I know it's mistake too
thank you for the sad rating
and for your lovely like

ok take this my little poem
Thee my problem And Give me the Rest,Give me the Rest I will give you the rest
(: no mistakes isn't

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة GhadaALShammari

thank you so much
no i just love english and everything about it and I have a passion for poetry

i dont know about "poetry" if we have to study it?or not
but i think it's nice to learn it .

our bachelor degree is english language not english literature, so i guess we will not concentrate on poetry too much

yes I asked the english
she told that she loves too

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة كيميائية للأبد

Great

gratefulness is you

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة wintr song

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة غرآم

Wonderful��

Thank you ��

thanks is up To allah
and you

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Serious Smile

I hope so ..

coz i have no idea about arabic poetry .. how is it possible to know the english

quite strange isn't it

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ms.jasmien

i do not know in poetry
that much but your words
attracts the reader

keep on Nail keep on

wow the attraction is you

thank you very much
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