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رد: هنا نقطة تفتيش لمادة المقال
14. " I am going to write about healthy food" . this thesis statement is incorrect
1- It makes a very clear point of view of the writer.
2- It clearly explains the subtopics of the essay.
3- It makes a simple announcement.
4- It is an improved sentence.
(The thesis is too general./ makes a simple announcement. Thesis stats an obvious fact.) avoid it in the thesis statement
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