Basim,
This can be a better proposal; You can of course continue writing about it. Your next step is to write your proposal in the format we talked about in the lectures. start with an abstract, introduction, thesis statement, objectives, literature review..... etc. You also have some grammatical mistakes that you need to take care of them. I have corrected some of them and you need to do the rest. (see the attached file).
If you have any question, do not hesitate to contact me
Good Luck,
Dr. Al-Hilal
الحمد لله رد علي بالموافقة