in spite of the fact that you are taking this course for the second time, you are repeating the same mistakes.
there is no relation between the title of your proposal and between its content: The title is difficulties of learning english in saudi schools elementary, while the content is about correlation between teachers and parents for developing english language. You need to either change the title or the content.
2- you have written your proposal in a form of an essay whereas we have instructed you to write it in the format of a research proposal. For example, there is no clear abstract, or an introduction, or a thesis statement, objectives, literature review, … etc in your writing.
you should re-write your proposal in the format we discussed in the live session and recorded lectures.
-the topic you chose is very broad. You cannot study all public schools in the kingdom of saudi arabia; you need to be more specific in your choice.
-your proposal is incomplete. Please write the remaining elements of research proposal discussed in the recorded lectures and re-send it to meagain.
if you have any question, do not hesitate to contact me,
good luck
dr. Al-hilal
صرت ما اعرف يعني ايش بروبوزل
انقذوني يا اخوان الله يرحم والديكم
