اول رد له
This is not a reaserch proposal. We did not ask you to write a paragraph about the benifits of learning English. I cannot accept the paragraph you sent as a research proposal
Please see the recorded lectures and act accordingly.
Alternatively, try to change the paragraph you sent into a research project by focusing on one or two ideas; for example you can tell us something about the steps of learning English in Saudia arabia using relevant examples, students, teachers schools, etc. tell us why for example you want to write about those benifits, and how can we decide on them, et. .
Best wishes
Dr. Al-Hilal