Free Time
Everybody has a free time in the daily life .
no need for "a" here because free time is uncountable
There are a different ways to spend it , such as ; read novels or story .
no need for "a" here because "ways" is plural
after "such as" we should put a coma"," not semicolon, and put the semicolon befor it
reading instead of read
Also, you can go to the beach with your family or friend .
It's ok, even though I think you mean friends not friend, but grammatically it's right
Shopping is a nice thing .
ok
You can go there and buy what do you need .
what do mean by "there", and no need for "do" here
You can practice your favorite hobby , for example; drawing makes you a creative person .
the same point we menshend above about "such as", apply it here
Also, you can use computer to have fun , chat with your friend or learn something new .
a computer or the computer or computers
Most of the girls spend a free time in cooking .
it's better to say ... spend their free time
Also, you can go to the cinema to watch movies and have fun time .
no need for the word "time" in this senence
And your advice is not applicable in Saudi Arabia 
To conclude,you should spend your free time to get benefit , and in the thing which you like to do .
nice