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This seems to be an interesting topic. You can of course continue writing about it. However, your writings involves a large number of grammatical mistakes and incorrect English structures. You need to pay more attention to your grammar. You cannot pass this course if you do not try to improve your English.
I expect that you present your first draft by Week 8. After writing your thesis statement, start your proposal by writing an abstract followed by an introduction, literature review, significance of the research , etc. In other words, you need to present your proposal in the same format we explained in the recorded lectures.
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