الدكتور الهلال هذا رده علي الفجر الساعه 4
Aziezah,
We cannot accept your presentation in the way presented for the following reasons:
1-*** You claimed that you will provide an islamic view of this novel; however, you only gave us one opinion of somebody who you claimed has watched the movie.
In other words, there is nothing islamic in yopur analysis.
2- There is a large number of spelling and grammatical mistakes; you have a problem or two in each and every sentence you wrote. Your English does not qualify you to pass this course. you do not even know where to capitalize a letter.
3- You claimed that Hary Potter is against Islam and has sextual abnormalities, etc;*however, you have not give sufficient evidence to support your point *
4- I have not seen the names of any author in your literarture review.
You need to revise your literature review; refer to the recorded lecture No 1 to understand how the literature review should be written; you need to mention at least two studies and show how they are relevant to your research.
5- There is no evidence or indication showing that you have read this novel.
6-*** You list of references show that you have depended on one single website to write this proposal
Once you do these corrections, your proposal is ready for submission. There will be no more feedbacks. Once you finish send a copy of your final draft to the university website and another copy to my email; write “final draft” in the object slot.