المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة مـلـح!

رد علي --- من خمس دقايق

وكانت الشعره التي قصمت ظهر البعير - !!
See my comments on your proposal and revise your work accordingly.

You have a large number of grammatical mistakes; I have corrected some of them for you. You need to do the rest. Some of the sentences are fragments; you cannot pass this course if you do not pay extra attention to your grammar.

Once you do these corrections, your proposal is ready for submission. There will be no more feedbacks. Once you finish send a copy of your final draft to the university website and another copy to my email; write “final draft” in the object slot.



Good luck,

Dr. Al-Hilal




الغريب - انه علق فقط ع الاخطاء النحويه - ولاجاب ملاحظات على البحث نفسه - ابداا!